Here's just a taste of the new project I'm working on....it's a huge change for me, since I'm trying to write it from the first person point of view...I hope it pulls you in :)
I’m sitting alone in the dark. Is he still out there?
I’m afraid to check. This game of one upsmanship is growing
tedious. I’m the expert. It’s now my move.
The police still have no idea the murders we’re committing are
related in any way.
I’m determined to be the victor in this little dance. Lance
is a creep. I don’t know what the hell I was thinking when I chose him to
be a competitor in this tournament. I was fine on my own,
but no, I had to raise the stakes by including him just because I felt I
owed him. As a result, he’s getting sloppy. My next victim now has
to be him. There’s no way I’m
risking getting caught because of this idiot.
We met last year, at a Narcotics Anonymous meeting. I’m
hooked on Vicodin. He’s hooked on Oxy. The perfect match, or so I
thought. My dumbest move was to sleep with him that night. He was
alluring but not very smart. Still, I continued to date him up until
recently.
I was in a drunken stupor when the idea came to me. I foolishly
admitted I had killed someone and how exhilarating it would be to have a
partner. After telling him enough details that could be verified, it was
too late to deny it. He wanted in, and he’s the type to flap his gums if
I didn’t agree.
He just killed a runaway, burying her body deep in the woods, and
now it’s my turn again. My first kill, the one I told him about, was an
old nemesis from high school. I prefer killing someone I’ve staked out
for a while. It’s all about preparation, not just randomness the way he did it. The enjoyment was more
in the gratification of having your victim look you in the eye and know you’re
going to end their life. I told him the rules of the game, and as if to
prove his stupidity, he completely disregarded them.
You rock!
ReplyDelete<3 Cayla
Oh my! You always give good murder!
ReplyDeleteI give good murder? That's a good one! Thank you!
DeleteI have to say I have never seen a book written from the eyes of a killer, interesting. You have piqued my curiosity.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa...it's a first for me. I've also never written in the first person point of view, so it's a challenge.
ReplyDeleteI am in!
ReplyDeleteKeep it coming, Dawn!
Dawn, I really like this, come on don't leave me hanging like this! Great work!
ReplyDeleteCheck out the second blog, "A Second Taste" for some more...you guys are slave drivers, though! It's only the start of my second work. I'm also still working hard at editing my FIRST manuscript, which I've ALREADY had an offer from a well-known narrator who offered to READ it for me to submit to publishers! Networking DOES work!
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